
Submitted by: freestyleon Wed, 05/14/2008 - 3:08am. Creative Writing
In response to Who Is the Ideal Buyer?.
Was it really only three month ago when Fjodor came back from Geneva with this portfolio? Yes, I can see the big letters "Sotheby" on the front page.
With my eyes only half opend I follow this dancing light, listen to my pillow still wispering little dreams into my ears, is this only another one? Opening my eyes a bit more I can follow Fjodors movements, with his light, elegant steps he is coming out of the "new old" charming bathroom to open the doors leading on my balcony, yes it's mine!
When my thoughts, my feelings, my memories follow him outside, the 40 years of our marriage are growing high like the oceanwaves I can see in Fjodors background. Allways the question will they support me or..., yes he travelled a lot and not always alone... but he never let me feel anything of all these let's say other aspects.
He still seemed so very young!
Oh I feel caressed by happiness, even my sisters voice from downstairs is real!
Soon the whole family will be here and our marriage party will carry us into a new hilarious time , half here in California, half in St. Petersburg.
Someone must have gone into the salon and is playing on my piano, luckily they have taste - Chopin is just perfect now!
Pazkaja will stay in the little house for some month, so the family can move in and out here as they like, sure with her here, the St. Petersburg heaviness will be soon forgotten!
I should send out my nose for a walk, sniffling through this enormous rich vegetation, let her plow up with a pinch of oceanwind and coming back to me with a cup of coffee smell.
Fjodor - , come, let me thank you!!!
O.k,
here my included less creative answers:
-in my opinion the ideal buyer is to find in Russia (worldwide they are buying and collecting expensive pieces)
-I would try to market it with a high quality portfolio through Sotheby's - Geneva
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Submitted by mandm on Wed, 05/14/2008 - 4:12pm.
We've moved this as it's not
We've moved this as it's not exactly an answer to the question.
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Submitted by freestyle on Thu, 05/15/2008 - 2:40am.
O.k,
here my included less creative answers:
-in my opinion the ideal buyer is to find in Russia (worldwide they are buying and collecting expensive pieces)
-I would try to market it with a high quality portfolio through Sotheby's - Geneva
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Submitted by chateaudazy on Thu, 05/15/2008 - 8:22pm.
The Russians....
Before voting starts you should paste your story and your revision together in a new submission under 'who is the ideal buyer?' You can't get votes if it is sitting here.....
Ciao mon ami
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Submitted by freestyle on Fri, 05/16/2008 - 1:50am.
Thank you for the advice,
I just wasn't sure if I have the right to put it back when it was disqualified!
So I will try it now, tu sait - moi je suis null avec la technique, alors au boulot!
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Ok. this was the best I could do, sorry not very beautiful, I know!